I like its animation, the music/audio also sounds okay while I would be curious for previewing levels than just slowly pass each one by using the keyboard-buttons. maybe a speed-up button for your character could be useful? (I generally also like to skip text in games and lol designed a textbased game which sounds quite unusual I guess)
Your drawn animations look cool, especially the main-character that could be guided within the game's sequences and those small notes could maybe appear bit zoomed e.g. when clicking the space-key (if your game should be a "keyboard only"-type in that case)? While they fit to the game's style and I like it's font, looks personal because of handwritten-text there, like notes that someone mention after lucid-dreaming?